Torn In Two

This heart that beats wild
At the very sight of you
The tenderness of a child
But you tore my heart in two

Bewilderment in my eyes
As I wonder why I hurt so much
So many parts of me dies
The skin, cold to the touch

This little heart so in love
Is breaking under defeat
This little heart, push and shove
This little heart that once beat

These hesitant eyes
Once full of hope
How it slowly dies
How am I to cope?

This solemn smile
Always left wondering
This innocence I once file
Your vicious plundering

The tears soak the pillow
My cheeks and eyes
Acting out the name of a weepy willow
My cries turn to sighs

My heart in pieces
All over the room
This pain, it never ceases
Darkness, forever it may loom

These sad words written
For everyone to read
Left for you, unspoken
How long must this lead?

Your clear, cold message
Is rapped around my mind
How all this is not your damage
Your name nowhere to find

My eyes never seem to close
As I try to remember happiness
There is nothing left to boost
I am left with emptiness

I care too much
In such little time
Cupid never leaves his perch
We weren't people to rhyme

I'm drowning in my sleep
I cant save myself
The water engulfs, so deep
You can't seem to be yourself

There is no more you
There is no more us
Now we are separate two
I can�t seem to make a fuss

I'm stronger then this
But I can't seem to stop the hurt
I am no longer his
I am just pitiful dirt

Way beyond acceptable redemption
In the world long forgotten to forgive
The silent world in motion
Is there are reason to live?

No one's going to catch me
No one has my back
There is know one to see
All the things I lack

Please comment on this poem, so I can see if I need to imporve on my writing skills. Thanks