Oooh very nice Rosy. I like the lay out of the poem on the page, the short lines look reminiscent of the short sharp beats of a drum

ARGH! I'M SO SORRY MADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok! Change the word Rosy to Maddy and take the message as read!

I didnt think rosy wrote that poem. it confused me for a while as it wouldnt have bin the first time i commented on someones stuff thinking it was someone elses. he he. i love the structure of this and the unusual flow. and the language i can feel it dripping from my lips as i read. if i read it aloud that is. which i havent. coz people would look at me wierdly. not that im in public. but the people in my head ewould think im wierd. aaargh., ill shut up now.