Hi rican chemistry!
long time no comment!
this poem, right now, reflects what will happen to me in the future with my own boyfriend. and though it is painful to face it even now, you have brought a light to my future. you made me realize that some things have to end. thanks for not being the only one. thanks...

Two words. . .FLIPPIN AWESOME!!! lol it was a good poem! i posted new poems, check them out please and give me some advice lol
thanks
great poem
~*~Amber~*~

This is amazing.

Wow.. that was excellent great job. THank you for commenting on my poem also. xox

So heartbreaking, but so perfect.

i loved it.

heidi b.

I like your poems alot... good job get em' tiger.... naw im playin... but for real good work

Awww.. lol i wish i could write like you! your definitely an inspiration to me! great flow! and i gave it a 5. keep up the gud work!

Hello Melissa! I haven't read your poems in a while, much less log in to write some of my own. I'm very surprised to see you still read one of mine. I am very flattered. I love this poem. Mostly because I can relate to it. It hammers into the heart and leaves a brunt mark. Sings a river of sorrows. Thanks for inspiring people.

This poem brought tears to my eyes.. beautiful! The flow was amazing and I loved your choice of words. Very neat and organized, the work of a professional! Keep up the awesome job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Wow. Exactly how I feel right now. I'm going through some tough times with a guy right now... However, I'm glad that someone like you can portray me feelings with utmost accuracy. Keep up the good work. :)

5/5