Comments : It can't be true!

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Aha. This was very cute and funny.

    You might want to add some question marks on some of the lines though.

    I rememberit was in my local newspaper and my teacher read it to our class... we were oh-so-devastated. ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    I should've used the "oh-so-devastated" in my poem! oh well too late now lol. :) thanks for the comment, its much appriciated

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Lol this is hilarious...
    Their plastic happiness is gone
    What will become of the world?!
    That made me bust out laughing!! Great job on this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karly

    5/5 This poem was hilarious. It brought a smile to my face right when I began to read it =)