Comments : A world falling apart

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hmm o.O

    Was this aimed at someone Marky?

    Are you okay?

    But uhumm.. I liked the last stanza! Great write =] 5/5

    `natalie xx

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    "Forgetting to forgive, and living to regret,
    And now you've done it.. you've made another threat..
    A threat to society, a threat to life,
    Why not just kill yourself.. here; I'll hand you the knife"

    ^that's^ my favorite stanza.

    this poem is good. you keep improving more and more. =)

    this is just sad... are you sure you're ok? you worry me so much sometimes.. >.>

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is really good and many can relate!! keep up the good work!
    ashley 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ebony

    OUCH! That's kind of harsh. If someone said that to me I think I would cry. But its really good. REALLY GOOD.
    ~Ebony~

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Good poem... the last stanza makes me think you're angry...

    *takes out therapist monocle and notebook*

    tell me about your feelings, Mark.

    lol just kiddin. 5/5!