Wow hun, I am blown away. These lyrics are incredaible and so well written. You have a powerful topic that you skick to like glow and a flow throughout the entire song/poem. I would love to hear that to music some day, it is really amazing. You picked a few ideas like feeling sad and rain and then you made them your own. Wow. I am tempted to put you on my favorites just because of this poem. Great job. I really was touched by it. I loved the wording of the chorus especially. Wow.

-Tainted