Ooh! This is sad! But I really liked how you did all the short words! That was different! And cool :P Tehe

`natalie xx

P.S 5/5

This is really good... its definitely different than any other that I've ever read. but i really liked it. It was like the first part of the poem was about the beginning stages of love and the last part was how most love ends. I could really relate to it. good job!!

Well i could relate to this so unbelievably much a few months ago... but now i have you.

this is a good poem, Mark. but i have to say.. it kind of hurts if this is how you really view love. =/

I like how u protray both sides of love

xxDeLie