by Michael D Nalley May 6, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I'm next to someone on the phone |
by David Moss
Well done, nice imagery on the touchtone. And thx for defending my country song! Good writing - DM |
by aaron 1 remo
I really like your style of writing and it is a very inspired subject! I especially like the repeating phrase it worked very well. |
by Natalie
Another really great piece. Loved how you repeated those few lines. Made it alot stronger and powerfull. And it was a great topic to write about also. Your poems are amazing. Theres not a thing I can say bad about them. Love them! 5/5 |
by Jyoti Rawat
I can chat with a member online |
Indeed its a unique poem. Very well written with a loud and clear message. Great work! |