I liked this poem, it reminded me of my friend's work, he's bleed4eternity of you want to check him out

well anyways, good job!

I like it. 5/5

Mallori

Aww this is such a sad and cute song! thanks for the comment! 5/5

Hey thanks for the critique on my poem!! sry i didnt comment you till justr now I havent been on..

-Rachel 5/5

Hey i guess great minds think alike!
you got some skills, it's nice to see other people writing lyrics on this site

Nice song. its kind of depressing but in another way uplifting.

Nice song. its kind of depressing but in another way uplifting. Thanks for the comment.
~Ebony~

It does remind me of my poem, ur right....i like the way u phrased ur emotions...ur a nice person and a grrt writer, keep it up.....thx for all ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

This was a heaps cool poem/song. i could relate to it easily which made it better, keep writing lol xoxo

Very good. 5/5

This is something, in a good way! 5/5

Ooh yeahh I've cried so much and u couldn't imagine wat I've been through, is just enough and just remind in the past, is jus lasting my memories.. So this is make me think of the past of wat I've been through.. 20/20. I wish could vote 500 times on this..