Hey girl whats up that poem was kinda heavy. But it was really good! Keep up the good work

love always,

Sara

Aww.. that's so sad.. :( i like how you repeat the last line twice, it adds that slight lik edge to the poem.. the only thing that i think could make it better is if you put it in some type of poetry form, so you could read it better :) keep up the good work and thnxx for the comment!
jessy