Omg, great poem so much feeling and such great rhyme but i no how u feel, it pains me to think u might be going throught this.

That was a really gud poem...i like it a lot and it really had a meanin to it dat i culd understand too....gud job
5/5
-Melissa

Omg! This poem was so good. It had such great rhyme and flowed so well! I could understand the meaning very easily. I really enjoyed reading it! Great job! Keep writting! 5/5!

I enjoyed your poem very much! It was very moving. Keep up with the good writing! I hope to read more of your poems.

WOW! that has got to be one of the best poems i hav read! i love itt! itz flows so nicely and it rhymes so well.. i just love it! keep up the excellent work! once again! WOW! lol!
jessy

This has got to be one of favorites. I call this one bittersweet. Its sad that he had to leave but at the same time Im like awwww ;) good job at playing w/ the emotions. Few writers can do that well. 5/5

I love it. It's a beautiful poem, and it's so well written. I liked the rhyming and it kept my attention.
I don't know why but I love when angels are used somehow in a poem, yours is perfect.

Great job! 5/5

That is so sweet.nicely written. It kept it's flow throughout the poem! nice job! 5/5

A fairly typical piece, not very unique or original. Not a bad write dont get me wrong but it doesnt really stand out to me as unique or very different from alot of the other love poetry within the site. Obviously a heartfelt dedication with beautiful intent...nice work

"But he had built my courage
And he had made me strong
Knowing that I'd need this
To survive when he was gone."

LOVED this stanza...this is a very inspiration poem and I'm so sorry you lost your "angel", and i hope someday that he comes back to you. This poem was very well written, great work.

--Steph

Excellent job.

"I never thought he'd leave me
Thought this angel was just mine
But he had to spread his wings
And teach someone else to shine. "

this is a great ending for this poem and its my favorite part. Wonderful wonderful job...