They way your commments hit me

by Chelsey   May 6, 2006


For Donald Minkus :)

Lately I've been reading your words
And my words have brought tears to your eyes
I didn't know I had that kind of power
You say that shouldn't happen to an older guy

You give me and my sister the biggest support
You tell us the love we have for one another
Is so special and amazing
That bond can't be broken by some other

Don your latest words to me have made me smile
Its like I caught an angels words in my heart
Sometimes I just want to break through the computer
Give you the biggest cuddle and never part

I'm sure you didn't know I felt this way
But Sometimes I'm just taken back
By your comments you leave me
I'm surprised at how I can make you feel like that

Don't stop being sweet to people
You don't know the impact it truly has
The comments hit you with the hugest smile
And sometimes the biggest belly laugh

I just wanted to thank you for your comments
Your words have pulled up my cheeks
A smile is laying on my face
At first I didn't know what to speak

Stop calling yourself an old man
I guess you can not see the beauty in your young mind
For your heart is pure gold and silver
And its beating as young as mine

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Awww Chelsey-Pooh my sweet little angel you have such a beautiful heart .And it certainly shows in this poem . You always manage to put a smile on someone's face with kindness and uplifting words.

    A beautiful dedication to Mr Donald ....I am so proud of you for being ......you

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh isnt he just the most darling our Donald God Bless him seriously - i agree with your poem whole heartedly Chelsey and like yourself Mr Donald has a special place in my heart also. This is a beautiful appreciative write for a kind and gentle man we need more just like in todays world - Loved it princess great work, precious dedication

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wonderful work! I love your poems, and lovely stanza! :)
    And thanks for the comment.