Save me

by Bianca   May 6, 2006


Interrupt these silent screams
Wipe away these blood laced tears
Save me-
I slipped off that ledge-
and I'm falling
as I fall, I see all that matters ignore me
Were the declarations of love just that?
Did they use their tongues to deceive my heart?
Which has shattered-
forcing time to stop
I watch them- watch me,
The coldness in their hearts-
melts my numbness-
and instantly the weight of the world-
equates into pain-
disguised as glue
and puts my broken heart back together-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this is really god... you described everything really well & the flow & rhythm really held up.. Great job on this. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Did they use their tongues to deceive my heart?
    Which has shattered-
    forcing time to stop
    I watch them- watch me,
    The coldness in their hearts-
    melts my numbness-
    and instantly the weight of the world-
    equates into pain-
    disguised as glue
    and puts my broken heart back together

    THAT IS JUST BEAUTIFUL! i cried when i read that part, it is so....hardcore emotion! wow u are simply a great writer! what can i say? wow...thats it. thats all i've got. wow 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ellie

    Interesting ^^
    Good Luck

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