Interesting ^^
Good Luck

Did they use their tongues to deceive my heart?
Which has shattered-
forcing time to stop
I watch them- watch me,
The coldness in their hearts-
melts my numbness-
and instantly the weight of the world-
equates into pain-
disguised as glue
and puts my broken heart back together

THAT IS JUST BEAUTIFUL! i cried when i read that part, it is so....hardcore emotion! wow u are simply a great writer! what can i say? wow...thats it. thats all i've got. wow 5/5

Wow this is really god... you described everything really well & the flow & rhythm really held up.. Great job on this. I loved it!