How I Died Of A Broken Heart

by LOST iN LOVE   May 6, 2006


As I look in the mirrior and stare,
I start to wonder if they ever really did care
They yell and say hateful things to me,
As I start to come undone
The battle is over now,
They won
I go to my room and look in the mirror once more
I hate what I see
Why doesn't anyone understand me?
It starts to get dark as the tears stream down my face,
But thats okay because I know it wont be hard for them to find someone to take my place
So as I lay down on my floor I close my eyes
I guess this will be good bye
I feel myself start to part
And that's how I died of a broken heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww this is such a sad poem but so well writen <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Serene Raindropz

    Wow..at least u have the gutz to admitt something that painful...ur not alone tho...nd i really love this poem...i like it how u express the pain u feel everyday nd how no one cares..u r very talented...keep up the gud work

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that poem was amazing!!!!...i can only hope to be that great of a writer..5/5....comment back!

  • 18 years ago

    by NiCoLe ErIn

    Ur poem blew me away

  • 18 years ago

    by Colin Chau

    Simple and absolutely flawless in what you wanted to get out. I never heard of anyone dying of it, but it's true. People are taking for granted and they can feel used when relationships and friendships crumble and fade. Sometimes it's circumstantial, and sometime's it's something someone did, and sometimes it's reckless and never fair. Anyway, that was a mess i wrote there haha. Keep on writing.

    -colin,//

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