by Sean Dohr May 6, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
A relationship bound by the court, |
by Fallen~Tears
Excellent poem.. the rhyme scheme was great and it flowed nicely.. 5/5 |
Hey. You won one of the five prizes in my contest. Congrats! Since you won, I guess you know how I feel about it. But Ill say it anymays. |
by Knoxy
Hey, this is really good...that would be hard to go through...i'm thankful that i didnt have to go thru with that...daily life struggles...if this is true i hope everythingz going alrite and what not...you did a great job...keep it up |
I really liked this poem!!! It was a pretty good one for " Nobody knows it but me!" You came in 2nd in my contest!!! Wouldn change a thing!!! 5/5 |
Brilliant poem, it was very well written. I know how hard it is to rhyme every line in each stanza without using 'forced' rhymes, but this worked really well, and flowed beautifully. |