I believe I understood the meaning of the poem and the content was great.

Many find it easier to get the flow if the syllable count is even on the stanzas

Suggestion
Love me tomorrow, for what I am today.
Be by my side, and don't astray

Add syllables the second line example

Love me tomorrow, for what I am today.
Be by my side, and please do not go astray

Each line has 11 syllables

Savior is spelled with no u

The poem deserves a 5 for conten

Thats rocking

I liked what you were saying even though it was a little hard to read im sure alot of people can relate i can tell you wrote this from the heart and its real...keep writing