Wow . awesome poem.
its completely true!

A good poem, ^^
Keep going~

That is soooo good and sooo true...keep writing those poems!!

Wow i didnt know people would actually like my poem! Im glad yal do, i will try to continue them

Thats a good poem hun! every thing has a reason but no on eknows them this has meaning in it and you have worked hard xoxroxyxox

I think its a very good poem

If love is not worth a heart break then your heart is not worthy to love.
go to school to make yourself real, teach yourself to be ahead.
live to feel good about yourself so when you die, you die happy. why die depressed.
friends are just physical, seperated feeling from reality and you'll be good.
just be yourself.
crime seems the easy way out but it makes it harder when you get caught.
it would take way more time then i we have for me to even get started to explain.
try writing in a blank state of mind with no real thought on what you want to write and just let it come to you. do that and let me know how it goes. thanks for your comment i really appreciated it.