Comments : Dreams of darkness

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    U mean Flames of fire correct it says fir. I also think it would flow better with saying "the hell" useing "hell" instead. otherwise great poem it deserves a higher rating.

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Also for needs to be added

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    In the line waiting me to fall asleep.

  • 17 years ago

    by gurbatt

    This poem is realy nice , I wish you more good works like this. realy realistic job. good luck and also check my poem and correct me if iam mistaken

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiiffaanyy

    Niice poem its really emotinal and good job expressing urself