U mean Flames of fire correct it says fir. I also think it would flow better with saying "the hell" useing "hell" instead. otherwise great poem it deserves a higher rating. |
Also for needs to be added |
In the line waiting me to fall asleep. |
by gurbatt
This poem is realy nice , I wish you more good works like this. realy realistic job. good luck and also check my poem and correct me if iam mistaken |
by Tiiffaanyy
Niice poem its really emotinal and good job expressing urself |