Holly shit..this shit is bananas, nicely written welldone 5/5

Ooh! I'm half asleep! But that was really cool! Me likes :P Tehe 5/5

`natalie xx

P.S. Sowy for the stoopid comment =]

It seems like a really long list, until the last stanza which kinda pulls it all together. i think that if u put more words to decribe each part of the "list" it would be a lot better... maybe i read it wrong n you bein the author would know a lot better than me what it should read like. but it was pretty good. if it wasn't for the end it wouldnt have been as good.... i like the words u did use though, like "Scandaled scheme" and i like the word shattered lol i don't know why but i do.

Great poem with a unique format

I loved the way u just named things off in a mismatched random way that was pulled together in the end....i loved the adjectives and descriptions grrt job i loved it...
love ya lots,
sore

Wow I wish I could write in this type of style.. Really caught my attention. Great rhymes and flow. Great write! Once again I love the format you wrote this in.. Awesome job =)

--emotionless.19*

This poem = brilliance

tis' grand. i love the style... it's absolutely amaziiiiiing.

just like you. =)

Aww.. very good.. that is very well written.. :)
jessy

I love this kind of poem when it's so personal and doesn't really explain what is causing the emotion. Mainly I think it's well written but a few lines lost the rhythm slightly. I didn't like the line 'bummed out' to me, it didn't fit. Good work though

Wow! I really enjoyed reading that! Great job! It had great rhyme and flow really well. 5/5

Wow~ really well written!...loved it...tho very sad..it was full of emotion and meaning....loved reading it!
~*Linz*~

NICE, this is my favorite poem of yours that i have read.. i loved this stanza

Dreading fear,
Loving hate,
A shedding tear,
Testifying fate.

amazing wording... i loved it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

ANOTHER great poem, ANOTHER 5/5! I have to put you in my favorite authors now Mark!

I relate and I liked it very much

Hole fu** that sgood hun i loved that omg i just couldnt stop reading i can relate lol too!!! but i love it its amazing an other good job done 3 down loads to go !!!xoxroxyxox

Oh, a really well written poem. =) so powerful, a 5/5 and 3 thumbs up from me. =D keep writing,
xxx

That is beautiful.

That is beautiful.

This poem was siply amazing..
it was beautiful..
well good job..
5/5 for me..
lia

Wow realli graet poem kind of emo but realli good...keep up the work

xoxox jessie