Comments : That Girl who has it All

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    I really like it, and I think everybody can relate to it, I know I DIFINATELY can!! You wouldn't believe how perfect a poem this is for me at the moment, thanks for writing it, and you did a GREAT job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Oh i sooo know what your talking bout, this poem reminds me of the song "girl next door- by saving jane", i know how both feels you should check out that song sometime anyways great poem 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very good meaning behind this one. And I bet alot of people can relate. I know I'd like to be first for a change. But keep your head up and you'll get there =]

    Loved the poem though. It had a really great twist to how I thought it will end after reading the title. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Hey hun,
    i know how you feel i use to feel the same way.... that was before i got a reality check... just becuase they have more money or are prettyer than i... i am me and that is better than anything... i have my friends and i am greatful for eveyone of them... you should be grateful for what you have and even more grateful for what you don;t because there is a reason you don't have things it is hard to under stand i know but if you think real hard about it you will under stand what i mean... sory this is so long... you poem is great.. keep writeing...

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    AWW i love this poem! its so good! it has so much meanin to it! 5/5 amazin work