With love from a friend that cares

by holly   May 7, 2006


To Dear Simon,

You muck up in class,
And don't do the work,
You break all the rules,
And act like a jerk.

Your proud of detentions,
You pretend not to care.
Is it a plea for attention?
Do you do it for a dare?

You've had a messed up life
With your Dad leaving before
But can't you try,
Try and be something more?

Believe it or not,
There is more to life,
Than smoking or drinking
and getting into strife.

There are more important things
Than human opinions.
You don't need acceptance
From the cool or their minions

Real friends like me
Are always here for you
To share the good times
And to hold you when you're blue.

I can't do much more,
Than love you and listen.
But I do want to help,
If you care for my opinion.

I want you to be happy,
not broken inside.
I want you to have a life,
as lovely as mine.

My secret is God,
And his love for me.
I'm not forcing this on you
but can't you see,?

I just want to help,
You could be so great
Don't live a life
That you'll forever hate.

With Love, from a friend that cares.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is soo sweet and i like how you made it in the form of a letter, its makes it more personal, wonderful job, this one is definitly my favorite :D

  • 16 years ago

    by DiNa

    Your poems are so good. when you write you can tell it comes from the heart<3

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I loved this poem. It was very well written, and your point came across amazing. The wording and flow was great. I liked the third stanza the most though. Just made me not have hardly anything to say. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    How sweet! The rhyming and flow is great on this one and I love the story its unique! take care
    - polly

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww...that was so heartfelt and touching! It's really good that your friend has someone like you to be there for you and to protect them, you're an amasing friend, and i hope whoever this is dedicated to, find happiness and a better life for themself. Amasing work.

    --Steph