Great rhythm...good flow too.

joy*:.xx

I liked this poem. You sound like a wonderful friend. I loved this stanza:

There are more important things
Than human opinions.
You don't need acceptance
From the cool or their minions

Keep up the good work!

Great poem

loved the

There are more important things
Than human opinions.
You don't need acceptance
From the cool or their minions

loved that last line in it..

great work

Very strong, indeed.. amazingly written.

I can see that you are a true friend indeed! I loved this poem :)

Aww...that was so heartfelt and touching! It's really good that your friend has someone like you to be there for you and to protect them, you're an amasing friend, and i hope whoever this is dedicated to, find happiness and a better life for themself. Amasing work.

--Steph

How sweet! The rhyming and flow is great on this one and I love the story its unique! take care
- polly

I loved this poem. It was very well written, and your point came across amazing. The wording and flow was great. I liked the third stanza the most though. Just made me not have hardly anything to say. :]

Your poems are so good. when you write you can tell it comes from the heart<3

Aww.. this is soo sweet and i like how you made it in the form of a letter, its makes it more personal, wonderful job, this one is definitly my favorite :D