Why Did You Have 2 Go
I Guess It Was Juss Ment 2 Be
When You Left Me
I Lost Everything
You Were My Best Friend
Also A Big Part Of
Our Family
We Will Alwayz Miss You
Don\'t Ever Think We Don\'t
Because With Out You In
Our Life We Wouldn\'t
Have,Had The Best Yearz
Of Our Life
Aww thats a realy good lil poem =]
i deffentlythink you sholud write a new one
and
KEEP WRITING!
thats the only way you'll getbetter :D
no one can tell u how to write poems you justhave to write more and more =]
&&thanks for your comment =]
lovelovealice
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