by TotallyBlond!!! May 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I feel out of place so many times |
by Jess
Wow nice poem very poowerful. keep up the good work 5/5 |
Not bad, could be a lil longer though..good job though |
by ChrisT
It was good i like some of the rhymes but you need a rythm kinda or maybe my beat was off idk its late but yeah good poem |
Very powerful, beautifully written |