Very powerful, beautifully written
5/5
keep up the great work,
love jessie xoxo

It was good i like some of the rhymes but you need a rythm kinda or maybe my beat was off idk its late but yeah good poem

Not bad, could be a lil longer though..good job though

Wow nice poem very poowerful. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess