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by libby May 7, 2006 category : Love, romance / desired love
Flutter flutter flutter and die die die words on a page only serve to deny. flutter flutter flutter and sigh sigh sigh words on a page could never realize all the flit flit flutter i carry inside. flutter flutter flutter and try try try words on a page always look like lies flutter flutter flutter don't cry cry cry the only truth is that we're so so alive.
by Bridgette
Great job on this. The repetition in it was really good and really held up well...making the flow of it good. Great job on this. Keep it up!
by Martyna
I really like the repetition, it gives this poem a good flow.