Have you ever noticed..*

by jac   May 7, 2006


Have you ever watched the clouds float by..
Gazed at the stars in the midnight sky..
Envied the birds, wishing you too could fly..?

Ever swam in the ocean through the gallons of blue..
Wondered about the desert, why the life is so few..
Or paid attention to the smallest things around you..?

Do you even notice those around you in need..
The ones who's families don't have enough to eat..
Anyone who isn't recognised after doing a good deed..?

Why do the most important things go unnoticed..
Why do people leave the world so out of focus..
When everything's at it's worst, why don't you notice..?

**I think this could easily be added onto.. I just thought I'd put it in before I lost it. Let me know what you think, any suggestions are welcome!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Wonderfully written, 5/5 for this one.
    Great compilation :-)
    always love ur work it really toches the senses :-)

    Thanks for commenting on mine

    Ali

  • 18 years ago

    by cαtαstrophe--x

    I think this poem is amazing, i love how it all ties in together.
    5/5 perfect score for a perfect writer.