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by Martyna   May 7, 2006


She had a few beers
too many.
Loss was a probable cause.

His body aches for hers,
but he listens to his brain instead and
drives her home.

Her body is
immaculate in
his arms as he carries her to her
bed.
He wants to take her beyond where she has ever
been.

He watches her sleep.
His chamber
beats to the rise and fall of her chest,
until it breaks.
Desire never matched fate.

Wow, sorry if this really sucked, but Im exceptionally tierd.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Hi !
    Actually i like this poem for a unique reason!
    yea.. it made me feel while readin' it, as if i was watchin' it! Sure i watched ur poem؛‎ ‎not only read it...!
    Keep it up,
    regards,
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    It's a very cute little scene, kind of makes you go "aww". My favorite part was definitely the third stanza. The only thing I'm not sure of is your use of the word "chamber". I don't really know what you were trying to say with that but it could just be me. Great job, and as always, it stuns me how concise you can be. I envy that.

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