by Darien May 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Waiting For the Day |
Aww, Very passionate poem---- Your word choice makes the poem so strong and filled with emotion---I really enjoyed reading it! 5/5 |
by MemoirsOfMe
I have to say, I have fallen in love with your love poems. They are just so blissful in the act of love and how you express it is just beautiful. The way you percieve and express these situations is divine. I liked this poem, and I like how it all came together at the end. Great Job! |
by Tiny Reader
Personally I don't like this rhyme scheme, but with that aside, it is a great poem. Well written, simple with a good balance of emotion. Again, this may be an accent thing, but here and there don't rhyme :) |
Wow, the structer was really interesting but really good. dang, i wish i could write like you! really outstanding! 5/5 |
Wow, awesome write. I loved it. So much emotion within, the flow was great. I am sure there are alot of people that can relate to this poem. Good Job!!! |