Thorn in my side

by dalin   May 7, 2006


You are my perfect enemy
without bleamish
unflawed
perfected
you came on
smooth and clean
fresh even
precise

i took you
out
to
the
further
most
point
to disarm
leaving you beaten

now you claim
victory

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  • 18 years ago

    by Olga

    Oh you seem to know what poetry is. In just a few words so much passion and so deep undertone. Good job! Thanks for the pleasure.
    Olga

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