Heartache

by Gemma   May 7, 2006


The earth is shaky
my heart is bruised
i cnt lose the feeling im being used
My body is cold
my mind feels empty
I wonder if you try to miss me.

Im not sure how to finish this so any help and i would be grateful.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma

    Well i didnt know if the ending sounded a bit corny, or cheesy

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel Puttee

    I think it's finished. Unless you want to continue it more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma

    Does anyone know how i could finish this poem?

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