Aww this is such a sad poem. It's always hard when someone close passes away, especially if it's someone we looked up to. I remember when one of my teacher's died, she was the nicest person ever. She taught me so much. This was a really good poem, because the readers could probably relate, and it was easy to figure out what was happening. The story was sad and powerful. Very nice write. Keep writing :)

That is really good. You had some great word choice. I loved it!