Omgg.. i am soo srry for your loss.. hope you are finding love from all your family and friends and i hope you know that i am here for you if you ever need some1 to talk to.. this was an excellent poem because it was based on so much emotion.. definetely 5/5!
keep writing
jessy

Awww Steve im so sorry to hear about your ex girlfriend...that is such a sad end. Your poem was a sad subject but absolutely a brilliant write keep them coming Steve.

Take care, lis