by The Poetic Child May 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Late nights laying down in bed, |
by Nix
I like every stanza except the last one. Flow is superb and than comes last stanza... Last line totally throw me off. Anyway this poem is excellently written and it deserves 5/5 |
by Kellsie Lynn
Wow! that one made me cry. so many people feel the same way at one point or another...trust me I did once too. and you did an awesome job of expressing the emotions you felt. this was probably one of my favorites. email me so we can talk more about it plz |
by stargirl49
I reeeaaalllyy like this poem. it reminds me of how i felt a few months ago when i had a huge crush on a guy at my school. he definitely didn' feel the same about me. lissa knows what i'm talking about. :( keep up the good work!! |
This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work... |
This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work... |