Wow.. this is really good. It reminded me of how me & my ex our now. This is really good & you described everything perfectly. great job.

Wow that was sad yet it left me with a loss for words... I know that feeling... good job!
*5/5*
amandaxOx

Awww...Yea...my ex broke up with me and I cry all the time. It's too hard to do this...but memories are what gets me up and going everyday. You're a great poet..keep up the heartstopping work ♥

Wow, this realyl touched me. I know a good poet when i see one. Awesome work. Keep it up.

So sad, but such a beautiful poem, great job capturing the emotions. 5/5 for certain

WOW vry strong and touching..it embraces you and than slowly watches you die..kinda sadish, but i love it. Keep it up buddy.

latas
lissa

This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

I reeeaaalllyy like this poem. it reminds me of how i felt a few months ago when i had a huge crush on a guy at my school. he definitely didn' feel the same about me. lissa knows what i'm talking about. :( keep up the good work!!

Wow! that one made me cry. so many people feel the same way at one point or another...trust me I did once too. and you did an awesome job of expressing the emotions you felt. this was probably one of my favorites. email me so we can talk more about it plz
Kell

I like every stanza except the last one. Flow is superb and than comes last stanza... Last line totally throw me off. Anyway this poem is excellently written and it deserves 5/5