Comments : Need to Bleed

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The ending is a bit of a disappointment. Not entirely original thought. Good flow but not exactly blown away by it.
    ~Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by dayana

    Yea i agree too ending would of been better if it was unexpecting but it was good overall
    dayana

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Theres alot of pian in this..

    awesome poem!!!