I love it.it is like strait to the point. and you just letting him know that you really do love him and that you would do anything for him........that is soo sweet....

This is beyond amazing, i am speachless. awesome job. ill be reading more of your work forsure! 5/5

Really nice!
i like when people are capable of using the same words in the start of the sentenses over and over and yet find a twist so the reader dont get tired of readin:D
cheers!

I really liked this one!!

Aww!!...that poem i soo sweet,great job

This poem was so sweet...I loved it. It had good a good beat to it. It was beautiful
Great job
keep it up
5/5
Breanna