Abuse..

by Amberinaa   May 7, 2006


Once upon a gloomy night
in the moonlight of December
a lonely girl with secrets died
a girl who no one will remeber

Her story is a tragic one
The not many people know
Her secrets are well hidden
and her bruises never show

Her life was taken by surprise
By the man she trusted most
Now she's just a memory
nothing more than just a ghost

Through all the bruises and the tears
she tried her best to live
she gave her soul her life her love
and all she had to give.

"Please stop" she screamed through her sobs
but the words he didn't hear
he just kept on hurting her
she knew that death was near.

The evil was just to strong
and took her from this place
And he killed her on that gloomy night
While a tear rolled down her face.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Amber, sometimes even when we live on,we feel like we died on the inside,people can be so cruel,If you ever want to talk to someone older but that still understands, I`m here for you.even strangers can care what happens to you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hmm. Acceptional work.
    Perhaps fix up the spelling mistakes though. Leaves the reader with an element of curiosity as to what exactly happened to her, maybe write a Part 2?
    Overall very good structure, Flows together nicely.
    xxx Ami

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Not as good as your previous work but im still hooked.
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow. This is the best poem i have ever read. I Love It!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hide the bong Jesus is coming

    Wow this was very deep and made me think a lot about how there are people out there such as myself.. Then again I really like the fact that it makes me feel less alone… You know? Well awesome poem your great with words. Keep on writing! you have true talent!

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