Comments : Abuse..

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wonderful write. I loved it. Very emotional and deep, beautiful stanzas. I hope you're not really abused though :(. Keep up your excellent writing.

  • Wow this was very deep and made me think a lot about how there are people out there such as myself.. Then again I really like the fact that it makes me feel less alone… You know? Well awesome poem your great with words. Keep on writing! you have true talent!

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow. This is the best poem i have ever read. I Love It!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Not as good as your previous work but im still hooked.
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hmm. Acceptional work.
    Perhaps fix up the spelling mistakes though. Leaves the reader with an element of curiosity as to what exactly happened to her, maybe write a Part 2?
    Overall very good structure, Flows together nicely.
    xxx Ami

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Amber, sometimes even when we live on,we feel like we died on the inside,people can be so cruel,If you ever want to talk to someone older but that still understands, I`m here for you.even strangers can care what happens to you.