by cαtαstrophe--x May 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Please comment and vote, i wasnt really sure what catagory to put it in.let me know what you think!. |
Great poem. I'm kind of speechless about this one...um...oh yea, towards the end you changed the rhyming pattern which kind of made the poem awkward to read. and you could put the poems in stanzas if u want it look more professional. overall Amazing poem. 5/5 |