Omgg.. that is excellent! that is just an amazing poem! it flows so easily and i love your choice of words! keep up the great work!
jessy

Brilliant

I really loved it! It was really powerful! It had really great flow, and the rhyming was really good,
You are a really talented writer!

That is good i like it keep writing

Excellent flow and thought provoking

As a person who is compleatly against he war, i found this poem beutiful beond words. it was heartfelt, and the feel of the soldier eager to set out to war, yet finds it is not what he thought it would be is a rather well known one. placing it in the war on Iraq instread of WWII was very clever.

5/5
Ruby

That poem was really sad it literally made me tear. it was so beautiful and i dont know what to say! it was just excellent!

pip xxx

Just really bad

Wow this is really sad, but on the other hand this is really good. I hope that you keep writng and I hope that you stay strong. ~Kayla~

What a powerful poem.
It moved me in ways I never felt.
Keep up your great way writing!
5/5

Omg that is amazing, so sad! 5/5

That was really good and it brought tears to mii eyes!! many ppl with loved ones in the war and those who have lost some one can relate keep up the good work
Ashley

The flow was off every now and then yet still it was good. The words are what had that hook to keep reading. Not bad....not entirely mind blowing but meaningful and thought provoking.
~Fallen

Excellant true and well done

I absoulutley loved this poem!!! I read it in one of the contest and definetly thought you should win!!! I dont even know what to say!! Your an awsome writer for only being 16!! never quite writing!!!! 5/5!!

Aww that was really sad. & I agree.. I think that the war in Iraq was pointless. But you did a great job on this.. really sweet & sad at the same time.. I loved it!

Wow your poem had such wonderful flow and your choice of words was brilliant...definately keep writing

I like this, its emotional, yet shows your point of wiev about politics. Excellent written

This poem is so touching, almost brought tears to my eyes

I think the war is SO pointless, i loved the poem as if it were based on a soldier..it was wonderful 5/5