by MemoirsOfMe May 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As the sun rises |
by Kaylee
You made the poem your own, your words, your descriptions, and not just some mock of everyday teen drama. Keep standing out with your writing. |
Beautiful. i loved reading this, it was very kool : ) |
Beautifully writin hun! :) i lykd it alot |
That was cool if a little...unsmooth with the flow sometimes. Still it was cool and strangely different than some I've seen. |