Awwww.. im sure ur not! you seem so nice and kind :) i really love this poem tho.. it flows really well and is kinda unique! keep it up! o, and thanxx for the comments!
jessy

Short and sad. It was weird reading and hearing it from the first person perspective. Enhanced the reality...awakened the sadness...brill...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Arrrrrh hun so much emotion in this piece. i hop you arr thank you so much for you comments.

luv gema
xoxox

Fabulous. Really dark and heartfelt. You kept this one short and I think this worked well in this case. The poem had a very strong rhythm and showed a very clear discontent. The last line I thought was a little out, I think it would scan better if you changed it so that it read:
"Singing this sad song" Great stuff though, 5/5 x

WOW!! THAT WAS COOL AND AMAZING!! *kisses her lips passionately* I love you hunni

This is a really sad poem, and it seems like something is bothering you. If you have any problems and need someone to talk to, private message me :) I'll be happy to help.