Awww... such a sad poem. Its never easy to let go such feelings and move on. Well its very well written and very heartfelt. You did a great job. And thanks for your sweet words on mine. :-) |
by Emma
Great Job....I loved the last stanza...It was so strong...nice job... |
by BlueDreams
Ohhh dear, what a sad poem you've penned here from your heart, beautiful expressive emotion, be safe. |
by Fear2love
Wow |
Fantastically written peice, very expressive and powerfully portrayed. |
What I love about this poem, is that it's just so sincere and sad, tells everything that hurts you and what you hope for the future. Good job! 5/5 |
by BrokenTessa
Awe, thats bunk. Guys suck eh' theres always those left over feelings. But the poem was good, I liked some of your rhymes. |
by Little Dot
Very good poem. Lots people seem to go through this, and it's always hard to overcome an old love. |
by Ty Jones
That's a tough love. It hurts. Good Job on this one. |
by Forsaken
This poem has such heart ache in it and it is so sad but it was also so very excellent. and i can relate. good job. |
by Aussie
I like how u worded about twisted love. lov is sad any way. ending is shoking:) |
by david
I really like this poem, it was good. keep up the good work. |
by natalie
This is really deep and i can really relate. 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
This almost made me cry..I can relate...I loved the imagery, flow and wording yet again. Another 5/5 |
by Paige
I love it! awesome and so real! |