Comments : Burden

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    HEy thanks so much for your comments.
    I saw this one all lonely without a comment or vote so i thought id give it some company.
    It certainly deserves it!
    IT was very emotional, you could tell what you were saying straight away.
    Someone will open their heart eyes and ears to here your story, i do know the feeling but i found someone.
    Many 'someones.'
    Keep it up
    And dont forget,
    smile when your happy,
    cry when your sad,
    Frown when your angry,
    And you'll soon be glad.

    :D
    lol, i hope that made sense.
    anyways
    cya round
    5/5
    ~EM

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow this was soo beautiful...my fav part

    I am a mystery
    Yet consistent....
    Almost, almost
    Non-existent.

    thanx for the comment..lets me know someone cares.........

  • !!! this is soooo good i really love it...
    your such a good poet

    much love
    [xXx]...leah...[oOo]

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    What a great and beautiful poem. xx wonderful imagry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was very well written
    Great job, I enjoyed reading it ^^
    5/5!!
    XD