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by dancer May 8, 2006 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
I arrive home late i slip through the door \'a shiver down my spine\' a feeling i cant ignor somethings not right there isnt a sound its just to quiet so i start to look round i walk into your room and find you there on the bed your sheets soaked with blood and your lying there dead a screetch of horrow and sickning feeling i run to the phone but its no longer working i start to panick \"what should i do?\" should i go get help or should i stay here with you but the answers forced on me someone enters your room i cant see his face but i feel like i know him i try to get away but hes bigger than me he holds my wrists tight he wont let me free he throws me against the wall i hear my bones break he strips of my clothes my innocence he planes to take i start to yell RAPE!!! but he covers my mouth i can feel his other hand as it starts to head south but he cant do this to me not without a fight im only 15 this is far from right but no matter how hard to get away i try its a hopeless feat so i break down and cry after hes finished he grabs a bat and finishes me off and that is thatDear God.. Send us up above me and mum commited no sin but what ever you do dont let that man in!!!!***please comment and vote***and i dnt know if this is in the right category or not so if its not tell which one so i can change it thanks also if you have any ideas for a name that would be a help thanks
by Ashlee
That was very good, but not in that way. What i mean is that the writing is good but what its about is wel.. bad