This was such a cute poem!
i loved it!
im def. not in college yet...but it reminded me of 8th grade.
i also loved the rhyming!

..mel..

if u kud check out my poem...**over it*** that wud be awesome!

Not too bad I was a little afraid to read it at first because of the length but its very good. I remember everything you talked about, if you like you can check out some of my stuff, its a little different but youve got to consider its comming from a 21 year old musician. Keep up the good writing, peace