You have a talent for expressing imagry through metaphores and similies. this is a fine example. a haunting array of images, and a fine and well written finish! exellent

Wow.it was really, really good, and I liked it alot.
You left me a comment (Or maybe a couple?) on a poem and I was just reading that poem. Thanks so much. I like knowing when someone appreciates my work. And this poem, was really good.

One of the best poems Ive read...

Excellent

Hey gr8 poem, i really liked it. loved the detail! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Creepy. very very well written emma. you are in a league of your own.

This is incredible! I am so impressed and awed by... everything. How it flows, how it fills you full of questions, thoughts and emotion. Wow.

I'm sorry it's been so long since you wrote the comment, where yo asked me to read this poem but i didn't get it. i only found it by chance. anyway, back to the poem. i loved it. the flow and rhymes were great, though, i think the last line on the third stanza should be a tad longer. the thing about your work is, that it's very creative and intelligent, and it always, always has depth in it. my favorite stanzas have to be the first and second ones. i tried to pick one, but it was just to god damn hard.

Brad

P.S. if you ever want me to read a certain poem, let me know.

Bye Bye Emma

Wow. u r so amazing. i luv every single poem u write. they just grab hold of me. gr8 work, again. loved everythin 5/5

You have a fantastic way with imagery. :) I have little to criticise in any of your work.

Well it should be no surpise if I was to tell you this poem was amazing. All of yours are. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.