I wonder y u didnt liked this one, i really did to be very honest.
anything coming right from heart is not meant to flow/rhyme or anything like that...its just a feeling that has been shared and u did it beautifully and honestly & thats what matters in the end.

all the best and take care
5/5

This gouguz... take care n dont stop smiling =)

Oooh lovers!
i like it xxx
sammi x